STORY INFO: Beyblades Bites

Yes! I have finally uploaded another chapter of this beautiful story for you and to make it even better, this one is quite saucy.
But you have to read it to find out what happens, I'm currently working on a website and a couple of blogs so I wont be able to get another chapter out today but give it time.

I really would love some feedback on this chapter but obviously there isn't much chance of that happening because no one ever seems to give me feedback even though I ask for it all the time. Would it take so much for someone to leave a comment? God knows!

Either way here is the link for the chapter and if you are reading this please let me know what you think! It's very important to me.

Link: http://www.wattpad.com/2989095-beyblades-bites-a-battle-breaks

STORY INFO: Beyblades Bites

This image really couldn't explain a part of my story better, but trust me it wont make sense until later on. You'll love the part where it'll be in though, my character actually looks quite similar to this anime girl you see the left.

Just remember that my character is called Serena Thomson. She's amazing, but misunderstood.

Wow, I haven't actually realised how often people use characters that are misunderstood I wonder what it is about that character trait that makes it so popular? Perhaps, it's the fact that it adds mystery.

Either way, have a look at the image and keep it in mind because it'll be very important later on. Mind you, you may not remember so I'll make sure to let you all know when I go on about it again.
That's just to make it easier for all you readers, perhaps I should create a soundtrack as well.. Hm, I'm thinking way to far into this now. The story isn't even doing that well, which is kind of depressing. Because honestly, I do love this story and I know it's going to do well when people give it a chance. But I honestly don't think people will.

Okay well I'm done rambling on, so I'll leave you all be. Remember you should all give me a message some time, or something similar. Would be nice to talk to the people who reads my stories.

STORY INFO: Beyblades Bites

I would be over the moon if my beyblade story was doing so well, but it's not. Perhaps it's a bit late to be doing a story on beyblade but it would be nice for people to just read the story and then let me know if they don't like it.
I think the story is coming along nicely it's taking a while to get the chapters out but that's just because I need to do my research on beyblade again. Either way I'm going to start promoting it on this website as well. I guess I just really want people to love this story or to get some kind of feedback on it.

Here's the link: http://www.wattpad.com/2900134-beyblades-bites-what-happened-to-her

Please let me know what you think of it, because it does honestly mean a lot to me. Actually I'll show you a picture of drew of beyblade when it was out, I'm actually starting to draw the original cast a bit more now but that's just because I'm trying to get good at drawing again.

STORY INFO: Beyblades Bites

I have posted the third chapter of this story and have done a fair bit of research to familiarise myself with characters and teams, don't forget their bitbeat's. It's taken a little while and I still have some more to find out but it'll be worth it in the long run, I know that once I get all the information I'll be able to add all the details I can to the story and even begin to open up the plot of the story. I would love to be able to get the full potenital of this story.

I'm not sure if I want this story to be a full blown romance, or perhaps a drama. I'm not sure what I do know though is that I am liking the plot I have so far and may do my best to improve it as much as possible. I don't like the idea of the whole story being about Tyson he'll be an important character but no more than that. I would prefer Kai, Ray and also Hilary to be the main characters in my story.
Perhaps this is because they are so under used, I want excitement and a thrill. What better characters then those three, plus my own character. Which of course will add quite a bit of spice. My character is named Serena and I believe to say she'll be quite the character once you get to know her.

STORY INFO: Beyblades Bites

As you can see here I have uploaded a new chapter for this story which mean's that is two chapters down a whole lot more to go. I hope you're enjoying this story so far, I honestly think it's going to get quite good. I perhaps a bit sexy? I'm not sure yet, I still have to work more into the story but with a bit of effort and some planning out it could work to it's best.
This may be one of my favourite stories, perhaps that's because it has something to do with my child hood. It's nice to get my child hood out there and show you the kind of adventures I used to plan out in my sleep. It's nice to know people are still interested in Beyblade.
I'm doing my research on Beyblading again as I don't want to make any mistakes with the fine details.

By the way let me know what you think it's the main reason I write stories I want to make my public happy and I believe I can do that with the right feedback. Don't be afraid to criticize my stories either or how I write. It's this kind of feedback that will help me to become a better writer.

STORY INFO: Beyblades Bites

I enjoyed watching Beyblade when I was younger and wrote quite a few stories on the programme, after taking a look through my older stories I can across one that I wrote when I was 14 years old.
The story is bad.. I mean the whole thing sounds quite bad, and I write 'she said' and 'he said' a lot. So after working through the story and altering a lot of information, characters and actual story I've decided to begin reposting it. So far I've managed to write up one complete chapter and have added a couple pages worth of story, which wasn't on the original.

I hope you all enjoy it, after posting the chapter the next thing I had to do was create a book cover and there it is above. Hope you enjoy it, may be worth a read. I know it's got 15 reads so far, lets hope the numbers go up extremely quickly.

STORY INFO: General Story Update

I am honestly SOOOOOOO sorry that I haven't updated my stories in what feels like forever, but I am honestly doing everything I can to catch up on college work.. which seems to be getting bigger everyday. I have now got myself a job at Argos so that'll be taking away more of my time but I can always make room for some writing somewhere. Just give me a moment to get myself organised and then everything should be back to normal.


Don't forget we also have a Christmas Holiday coming up which means I will be having myself some free time for writing and college work, so things shall be looking up. I know how annoying it can be when people don't upload so I do feel your pain. But I also know how great it feels when they do, so stay positive and hopefully I'll get myself sorted in no time straight. Cross your fingers and wish me luck people.


Enjoy, what's been posted so far. Perhaps read it again so you don't forget it. 

STORY INFO: Seduced Book Cover

 Here they are, the four covers that I need to choose from. I do prefer number 2 but I would like your feedback and to see what you all think. They are in order, the top one is number 1 and counting down to number 4. These are quite nice cover's I must admit, but I'm not sure which one takes me breath away the most.
Let me people and then I'll beginning working on whatever story you want me to, just let me know and I will be posting a new chapter to that story soon!


Here are my descriptions of the covers.


1. It's based mainly around Jane's character, she's quite mysterious with a bit of a twist, I want you to see her at her sexiest. She's finally been 'Seduced' and this is how she is. I wasn't sure about this one though. And the picture doesn't fit with the text, which is a shame as the text is quite sexy in it's own way.

2. This one is my favourite, I think it's because it's secretive but also kind of dangerous. You know she means business just my her heals alone, but with her long legs out you get drawn to them first. That's how I made the text look, very in your face and demanding, just like Jane's character.


3. This one is more Burlesque styled, as you can see with the text. It's loud but with a subtle style, the way Jane starts out as. She's quite plain to begin with but with a nudge here and there she finally begins to stand out from the crowd and have control over her life.


4. The way Jane's character looks in this cover is beautiful, she comes across as innocent but with the right attitude you know she can become 'Seduced'. This was the main feature that drew me into this image. The text I wanted to be loosely based around the Jane in the picture. She's subtle but demanding.


Let me know what you think, thank you everyone!

STORY INFO: Nothing Ever Seems Quite Right

It shouldn't be long until I finish the next chapter of Nothing Ever Seems Quite Right it's coming along quite nicely. I hope you all enjoy it when it's posted, and let me know what you think.


That's all for now :)

College Studies

I have finally finished the major project I had to get finished, the deadline was today and I've handed it in.

So now I have a couple days to relax and get on with my own stuff.

Hopefully I'll be able to get my stories up to date and start updating them soon. I'm still so very sorry for this in-convience, but I promise to try harder to keep the stories up to date.

I maybe working on some new material I have been thinking about lately, but I'm not sure yet. I may just get on with the stories I have up at the moment.

I really want you all to read what's been happening in my life lately and I would love to see what you think of the chapters I have planned out for Captain America I know you wont be disappointed, that is for sure.


Anyway, if you need to know anything just message me. Either on Blogger or Wattpad.
Here are the web addresses:


Wattpad: http://www.wattpad.com/user/elliejohns


Blogger: http://elliejohns-tinyperson.blogspot.com/

Apologises

Yep you heard it right, I am apologising for not updating in what seems like forever. I haven't had any time what so ever to write and when I do I'm so tired I have to sleep. I didn't think college would be this draining but apparently this year it is, although I am trying to give myself a bit of free time to be able to do it. Yes, to be able to get the stories posted online. 
I love getting feedback and I know so many of you love the Captain America story and I really want to carry it on. I just hope you all do enjoy the story chapters when I finally do get around to posting them.


Troubles are hard, especially at the moment. Wish me luck.

STORY INFO: General Story Update

I've decided to give you people a general story update. At the moment college work has really been bad, as in I can hardly keep up with it all. I really should start to work harder in class then I wouldn't be so behind.
But on a good note...


Nothing Ever Seems Quite Right: Is coming along all right, as this is my main story at the moment as it's based on my life. SO I spend just a little more time on this story to keep it up to date.


Captain America: Losing Control: Hasn't changed I'm afraid, I tried working on it more recently but the words just didn't seem to fit together as well as I hoped.


Seduced: Though I do like the beginning to this story and see great potential, I wont be posting the first chapter until I'm completely happy with it. But, I do believe you'll enjoy this story due to the great ideas I have for it and just the pure thrill of the first paragraph.


This Smile Changes My World: I love this story and truly want to work on it all the time, but I honestly am at a dead end with it for the moment, though I do have many chapters to come I just need to focus on something else for the moment.


Fighting For Love and Lust: This isn't a very popular story, and this is one of the reasons why I'm taking a break from it. As this story is a converted from another story I wrote it's going to take some while writing so it'll be one of the last ones I update. Don't worry though should be able to get on track soon enough.

STORY INFO: Seduced

This is a new idea for a story, it's going to be quite a sad and seductive story. I believe it will be almost tear jerking.

Which I'm aiming for, is a story that people crave so badly they can't quite literally wait for.


Let me know what you think of the idea, as I'll be posting it right here. The first chapter is going to be called:-

Chapter One: Fear of Falling

His eyes were brimming with tears; the thought of breaking his heart was nothing but torture for me. I didn’t want to end it, but I just wasn’t enough for him. His words fought back against everything that I said, I tried to prove my point but with every word he just screamed back telling me ‘I was wrong,’ I ran my hand lightly across his face whipping the tears from under his eyes.

                “I love you, but you need someone who’s going to be everything you need.” With these finally words I kissed his forehead lightly lingering there for a brief second, I finally coughed up the courage and walked away. I knew he wanted to follow me, I could hear him shuffle. It was for the best, and that was something he had to understand.

                “Please, Jane. I can’t be without you, I need you.” I was only 3 metres away, and stopped for a brief moment. I knew if I went back he wouldn’t let me leave, not this time. I looked at him just once more and mouthed the words ‘I’ll love you forever, but forever we’ll be apart,’ for a moment I felt stupid. Until I succeeded in getting him to turn back towards his home, I hated the fact that I’d done this break up in the middle of the public pathway, but for me getting the whole situation out of my system seemed like a relief. I finally reached the bridge that lead to my home, my friend Diane was waiting patiently on the other side to comfort me in case of emergency. For a moment I thought I didn’t need her, until half way across the bridge I gave in.

                Emotions smothered my face, tears cascaded swiftly down my cheeks and I cried out to Diane, she ran over to me quicker than I thought she could.

                “Oh shit, Jane was it really that bad?” I grasped hold of her tighter than I thought possible, and hid my face in her neck. 

STORY INFO: Nothing Ever Seems Quite Right

I will be doing some work on this story tonight, and hopefully if I can I shall try and do some work on Captain America.

I have some new ideas for stories and may try and work on them if I can find the time.


Like I said before, I have been struggling with college work lately but when I can get some free time I'll do my best to work on the stories.

This is quite hard when you can't seem to think of any good ideas, that's what I'm struggling with mostly. Just getting the words down on paper, once I get this sorted I shall be updating as often as possible. I promise you that.

STORY INFO: Nothing Ever Seems Quite Right

I will be posting another chapter of this story and very soon in fact, actually I'll be posting it tomorrow morning when I wake up. Hopefully I can get Captain America: Chapter Four finished by the end of the week.

But as I said in my last update, I have to pause my stories quite drastically as I have a tone of college work to do.

Even though I spend a lot of time doing it, it just doesn't seem to go down. Don't you just hate it when that happens. It also doesn't help that lately I have been running myself raged with stress, no matter how much I try to give myself a break someone just pretty much, shit's all over my day. It happens constantly. 

But don't worry this shouldn't be lasting for too long, I do hope to get my life back on track as soon as possible. On a happier note though, the new chapter shall be up tomorrow I'll let you know how Captain America is going and hopefully have it up by Saturday. Can't make any promises though. 

Wish me luck.

Pausing For A Moment

Yep, your read that title right.

I am pausing all my stories just for a week, maybe..

This is only because I have to work very hard on my college work at the moment, and give it all my attention. I know this is going to be hard, not only on me but on you to. I want you to enjoy the chapters that are up at the moment, and I'll do my best to work on the rest of the chapters in my spare time, whenever I have spare time.


I don't want this break from my stories to last too long, but for some reason I have a habit of letting things get on top of me.

Hopefully I can get this problem sorted quickly and get on with what I love most, and that's making all you lovely fans happy. While reading my stories of course! :)


Enjoy for the moment, and don't worry this break won't last too long.

I'll get chapters up so soon, I just know it.

STORY INFO: Captain America - Chapter Update

That's it. 

The 3rd Chapter is up and I hope you all enjoy it.

I'm sorry the chapter is so short but I shall be working on the next one, I want to try and get another chapter out just as quickly.

Just wait though, the story shall be getting a lot better, the more I work on it the better it shall be.

Enjoy.

STORY INFO: Captain America

I can finally say that tomorrow I shall be updating my Captain America story finally, after a long awaited chapter 3. I hope it's going to be good as you all hoped and I hope you all enjoy it.


I'm going to start working on the last tweaks now, and you never know it might be up by the end of the night.

Either way, I want feedback and lots of it. My story is finally starting to get noticed and I love that people are telling me what they think.


Especially ElenaGilbert on wattpad, she's a fan of mine and tells it how it is.

I love that.

So I shall be dedicating the next chapter to her, personally. As she's given me the feedback I've been dying for.

STORY INFO: General Story Update

I'm not sure I'll be able to get the chapter out today, as I have to go gym and do this work from college.


Urgh.


But I shall do my best to get it finished off and start work on the 4th one so when I do post the 3rd chapter it would be long for the next chapter to come up. I've also decided that I'm going to pause these stories:

• Fighting For Love And Lust
• This Smile Changes My World

I know they aren't doing to well at the moment anyway, that's because I haven't been posting for them, but when I do start I hope your going to enjoy them. I also have a little beginning piece I'll post it on here.

I want people to write to me telling me what they think this story could be about. I'm really stuck but love the beginning, so opinions and options would be great! So if you haven't guessed already I'll be working on these two stories:

• Captain America: Losing Control
• Nothing Ever Seems Quite Right

I hope you enjoy them as much as I like writing them. Because I feel so proud of myself when I finish a chapter it's  rather sad to be honest.

Well that's it for now, I'll update you very soon.

STORY INFO: Captain America - Chapter Update

I should have this chapter finished by tomorrow and posted, thankfully I am at my boyfriends so I can post it as soon as it's finished. Honestly I'm not sure if this chapter is any good as I'm quite tired, but 

I'll do my best to make it decent for you to read.


I hate the idea of giving you a rubbish chapter to read. 

I know a couple of my fans on wattpad like this story and I hope to make it everything you want. I want this story to be so good you'll all be expecting a sequel. 

Which I am already debating about, I have even thought of a plot for the sequel, but it depends what you all think of the first one. 

It may be good it may be rubbish we'll all just have to wait and see.

SNEAK PREVIEW: Captain America - Losing Control

It was her face as she screamed, then the blast. As I stood still doing the one movement I managed to do pressing my hand across my mouth making sure I didn't vomit. The stench of her skin still lingered in the air, Steve's face was a picture. Only for a second did he stay still, before I knew it he was punching the life out of the man who did it, the who disintegrated the beautiful woman that once stood at the flat door along the hall from ours. 
            I wanted to scream, the only problem was it felt like the air had been sucked from my lungs. I took one more look at Steve and he pointed towards the stairs, I took my chance and ran. Hoping to god my legs would last long enough to get me far away.


To Be Continued...

STORY INFO: This Smile Changes My World

This was a story I posted very quickly and without telling you why, it's a story I spent quite a lot of time on and I do still have so many chapters to write this for this story. 

It's loosely based around my life, but some parts are there for a more dramatic purpose.

I think this story has a lot of potential, and if you really read it you'd enjoy what happens. 

But of course the story is still in it's early stages. 


If you have noticed I haven't updated lately and that is due to being so stuck on the story, even though I know what I want to write I just can't seem to get the words down on paper 'so to speak' I hope you enjoy the chapters that are up for the moment, and I hope I can get myself together and start updating more.

STORY INFO: Captain America - Chapter Update

This seems to be the one story your all in love with at the moment and honestly I'm doing my best to get the chapters out, but no matter how much I try I just can't seem to get the inspiration to write this story at the moment.

I don't know if it's due to the stress of college or my other story:


Nothing Ever Seems Quite Right 


But at the moment I'm organising my story and from what I've organised so far it seems like this story is going to get a lot more exciting and if you have watched the film then you'll know that I'm keeping the characters linked to the film. I've also checked up on some characters and everything shall be linked to the avengers as well. 

I hope you like the next chapter it won't be the faint hearted.

STORY INFO: Nothing Ever Seems Quite Right

This is my main story at the moment as it's based on my life at this current moment. I've been doing my best to get everything out as quickly as possible, yet for some reason people just aren't rating it or commenting on it. So I have no idea if I'm doing any good or not. 

I hope you enjoy the story and really see the potential that I see in this story, my life used to be a lot more dramatic then but I barely remember the details, but near the end of this story or perhaps in the sequel I shall really open you up to the hurt person inside of me.


There are a lot of things in this story that you don't know yet. I believe once people start reading the truth the may understand my reasons in the story a bit more.


I've almost finished the next chapter and I hope you all enjoy it, there are so many more chapters to come. I can promise some are far more exciting then others.

NEW: New Blog

I was thinking about this for a while, I really want a blog that actually means something to me.

And what more do I like than reading and writing? So why not dedicate a blog to that. It's going to be amazing, I honestly can't wait to see how this blog develops over time, wish me luck for the future.

So here I am trying it out on this one.

I have a more playful blog and this is the website for it: http://elliejohns.tumblr.com/

To be honest I'm not quite sure what I want this blog to be about. But I do have time to think about it. 

So I'll do that. 

If any one wants to know anything about my blog or my stories, then this blog shall be the place to find out about it.